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Wednesday 18 October 2017

Poem About The New School

I can see the world revolving around the school,
It looks very nice and very cool,
I can smell the great new land from here,
It is like I am already there,
I can hear the people screaming and sing and shouting with glee,
It sounds just like kids playing in the sea,
I can feel the glossy part on the whiteboard table,
I know that it is very stable,
My heart is pounding with the happiness inside,
I love the school as if it were alive.

Today was the 3rd day at our new school and my 2nd because I was away yesterday. We all got to write a poem about the new school. I think that it is amazing but that is just my opinion. I used rymzone to find the rimes. I have put a lot of thought into this poem. I love this school because it looks amazing. Just like I said in the poem. I am proud of my poem.

Monday 2 October 2017

The Giant Complex Sentences

Today in writing we had to write 3 giant complex sentences about this photo. We got the photo of once upon a picture witch is a website that you go on to find a photo that you want to write about. I had fun doing this. The hardest part of this hole thing was to come up with a complex sentence. The easyest part was to separate the simple parts, verbs and the conjunctions. I had so much fun doing this. I think that when you have time you should try this webstite.

shaun-tan-the-story-of-the-giants


Simple
Red
Verbs
Orange
Conjunctions
Yellow

It was dark and creepy because it was a silent night. Giants came to eat the humans as if they were brussel sprouts. The children were sing take me to church until these giant vacuums came to swallow them. Everyone starded to get scared as if they we're a little sceard princess hiding to save herself.

The Hunt Is On

Today for reading we are up to the 2 day of our Traviling the world. Today we got told to Chosoe what place gave you the most fun and witch place was the best experince. That was just the first task. The secound task was to list 5 questions that you would ask to Laura Dekker. For the Bonus one we got told to interview on of your friends. I loved this one.