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Wednesday 28 August 2019

The All Blacks Reply - C.I.P

Today at the start of C.I.P we had been shown a message sent from Anton on behalf of All Blacks. They heard that we, Hornby High School were creating a special something to encourage them with their mission to win the world cup. When I heard this message I felt inspired to make more improvements in my poem but when I thought more about it I felt like I had already done all that I could with the knowledge I had. 


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  1. Anonymous4 September 2019 at 10:00

    Hello Emily i really like how the way you explain things about the video and adding some more details about them. Next you can probably add more things about the other things that he have said. Great Job

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