This is my writing that I am proud of but it was hard to find out what you could put there. First we all brainstormed altogether. Then we got told to right all the words down. Now I am up tp the stag to put it on my blog and that is what I am doing. Now I am done.
That Was Summer!
That Was Summer!
I remember smelling the freshly picked flowers from the daffodil field.
I remember tasting the sweet taste of freedom.
I remember seeing the massive waves crashing along the beach with the stones and seaweed.
That was summer
I remember feeling the wind flowing through my hair on my fast motorbike.
I remember hearing the magnificent sound of the birds chirping in the fresh air.
That was summer.
Hi my name is Lily. WOW! I like your story it was great it had a lot of great wow words. Maybe next time you can put pictures. I remember doing this as well it was fun.
ReplyDeleteHi, I like how you used heaps of adjectives. Maybe next time you could put more pictures. I have done a That Was Summer poem and it is really fun.
ReplyDeleteI love summer so much i wish we had it every year from yms
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