Today in writing we had to write 3 giant complex sentences about this photo. We got the photo of once upon a picture witch is a website that you go on to find a photo that you want to write about. I had fun doing this. The hardest part of this hole thing was to come up with a complex sentence. The easyest part was to separate the simple parts, verbs and the conjunctions. I had so much fun doing this. I think that when you have time you should try this webstite.
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Orange
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Conjunctions
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It was dark and creepy because it was a silent night. Giants came to eat the humans as if they were brussel sprouts. The children were sing take me to church until these giant vacuums came to swallow them. Everyone starded to get scared as if they we're a little sceard princess hiding to save herself.
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