I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Emily,I'm Denise from St Bernadette School and I am a year 5. Love your blog post. It's Fantastic. I really like the way you put lots of information and punctuation to your post. It really hook's me. It feels like that the people at the olden time that they seem really happy. Maybe you could add some more pictures and you could tell why you did it.
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Hi Emily,I'm Denise from St Bernadette School and I am a year 5. Love your blog post. It's Fantastic. I really like the way you put lots of information and punctuation to your post. It really hook's me. It feels like that the people at the olden time that they seem really happy. Maybe you could add some more pictures and you could tell why you did it.
ReplyDeleteThank you Denise, I will make sure to put more pictures in next time I make a blog post. Thank you again for the wonderful comment.
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