I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, 25 October 2018
Probability And Statistics
During the week we have been working out how to use probability and statistics to solve some difficult problems. I found most of the work really hard but made it in the end with the help of my classmates. We got to make a probability scale to help us and let me tell you it was a fun experience because no one knew what to do. With a bit of research we got the work done within a week. I am still having trouble doing the work but I feel that I am making some progress.
Tuesday, 23 October 2018
Yurtle The Turtle
Here Is Mine -
Dear, Mrs Mitchell
I am here today to tell you the benefits of having frogs as class pets. You can tell them that they will start croaking of you are very very quiet to keep them calm. The funny thing is that when we meet Mr Mitchell he told us this and we got quiet instantly. Another thing is you would be able to get a free bugs farm so you can feed you frogs. I find it disgusting that you have to be near them but we have heard that kids love bugs. They don’t take much to be able to take care of them
The down sides might be if your to quiet then they might be to loud and destorbe them. How Mr Mitchell solves it is knocking on the glass but it doesn't always work. The other thing is the kids might not like bugs and start to scream while they run as far away as they can (definitely not like me).
This is all I have to say but maybe if you don’t agree 7mt might try next year. Then we will have the turtles.
Yours Sincerely
Emily, from 7mt
With all of this said you would think that we would want the frogs but we have had them in the class all year had have gotten annoyed of their crocks because it distracted our work. It was a complicated to get her but it was worth it in the end.
Tuesday, 25 September 2018
B and E!
This term we have been doing something called business and enterprise. In this we have to create a product to sell to our friends and families, even people we don't know. I am in a group that consist of Mulan, Genaca and Tanisha. We have a company called The Slime Tribe and if you can't tell what we are making, we have decided to make slime.
Moto
It's time for us to shine, It's our slime time.
Logo
Moto
It's time for us to shine, It's our slime time.
Logo
Monday, 24 September 2018
A Strange Thing Happened On My Way To School Today!
For the past 3 weeks we have been working on persuading and entertaining.
On my other post I was to persuade my parents/gardenions to by me my
dream pet. I chose wolf because I love them. We were told that we weren't
aloud to entertain. In this 1 that was our main goal and I feel that I did an amazing
job.
Title: A strange thing happened on the way to school today
Make up a story about something strange that happened on the way to school.
Make sure you:
Have an orientation (where, when, who)
Describe the main characters
Tell me about a problem that happened
Tell me how the problem was solved
End with a conclusion
Have a clear message, theme or moral.
Instructions:
- Write your draft in the Draft section of the table below, in the box by your name.
- Provide Feedback on your writing buddy’s draft writing in the Feedback section of his/her writing box.
- Read the feedback from your writing buddy.
- Copy your draft writing into your Final box and revise this based on the feedback you have received.
- Assess the final version of your own writing for Ideas and Structure & Language using the Writing Rubric.
- Peer-assess the final version of your writing buddy’s writing for Ideas and Structure & Language using the Writing Rubric.
Stumbling on the pathway through the forest trying to get to school on time.
It was friday and I was tired from all the work from school. I was by myself
because I woke up late.
I stopped only to hear a howl from the trees. I got intrigued in what it was
that made the howl so I went of the path and into the dark part of the woods.
I looked around only to find wolves laying on the ground with others on top.
The once green grass had blood dripping from it. I got scared and started to
scream. Everything went quiet. Not one wolf was moving but they were all
looking at me.
I noticed that three wolves were trudering towards me so I moved back.
All of the wolves ( that were alive ) were growling at me as if I were their
prey. I finally noticed wolf that was right in front of me but what shocked
me the most is that It turned into my brother. The other wolf tuned into
my father and the last wolf turned into a man that I felt had a lot of power.
The wolves started to fight again but this time the man and my family
grabed me and ran they ran and ran until we couldn't hear them anymore.
The man that I didn't know walked up to me, grabbed me and shouted “MINE”!
My father told me that we were all werewolves and I was shocked.
I found out that that the man's name was river. Apparently he was my
mate and I got told that a mate is short for soulmate. It’s something
that wolves do. They can’t live without them. The wolves that I just
saw were from his pack. He is the alpha also known as the leader.
Some of them are roges and they are trying to protect their kids
and mates. I wanted to help them but my mate dragged me to the
house and locked me in his room. The war ended and I realized
that I was late to school.
That is what happens when you wake up late and walk away from
your path. Always stay on track.
Here Is My Feedback From My Friend Chloe
Hey Emily, Your story is very interesting I like the part when you
said “were growling at me as if I were their prey” There is a few
things that you need to work on like things that don’t make sense
“I found out that that the man's name was river and he was my
mate. I got told that a mate is like a soulmate for wolves” besides
that it is amazing keep up the great work.
Here Is My Amazing Final That I Have Worked So Hard On
Stumbling on the pathway through the forest trying to get to school
on time. It was friday and I was tired from all the work from school.
I was by myself because I woke up late.
I stopped only to hear a howl from the trees. I got intrigued in what
it was that made the howl so I went of the path and into the dark
part of the woods. I looked around only to find wolves laying on the
ground with others on top. The once green grass had blood dripping
from it. I got scared and started to scream. Everything went quiet. Not
one wolf was moving but they were all looking at me.
I noticed that three wolves were trudering towards me so I moved back.
All of the wolves ( that were alive ) were growling at me as if I were their
prey. I finally noticed wolf that was right in front of me but what shocked
me the most is that It turned into my brother. The other wolf tuned into
my father and the last wolf turned into a man that had a lot of power vibrating
of him.
The wolves started to fight again but this time the man and my family
grabed me and ran they ran and ran until we couldn't hear them anymore.
The man that I didn't know walked up to me, grabbed me and shouted “MINE”!
My father told me that we were all werewolves and I was shocked.
I found out that that the man's name was river and he was my mate. I got
told that a mate is like a soulmate for wolves. They can’t live without them.
The wolves that I just saw were from his pack. He is the alpha also known
as the leader. The wolves that were trying to hurt them were roges. There
weren't any woman there because they were all in the safe house. I
wanted to help them but my mate dragged me to the house and locked
me in his room so I don’t get hurt.
The war ended and I realized that I was late to school. I quickly ran out of
the house and darted to school like I were a cheater. I got three weeks
of detention but I thought that it was worth it. I was about to tell my best
friend jewels but I got a call from my brother and he told me not to tell
anyone. He also told me that his mate was jewels. I flipped and jewels
ran. “HEY YOU BETTER COME BACK HERE BEFORE I MAKE YOU”!
That, is the story of what happens when I am late to school. That was the
time that I learnt to always stay on track.
Finally Here Is My Score From The Rubric
Assessment:
|
Self
|
Peer
|
Ideas
|
R4
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R4
|
Struct & Lang
|
R4
|
R5
|
Wednesday, 12 September 2018
WOLF!
Last week we got told to persuade our parents to get us a pet.
I chose a wolf because I love to read about them.
By what I have read I would find a wolf very handy. hope you enjoy!
Instructions
Write your draft in the Draft section of the table below, in the box by your name.
Provide Feedback on your writing buddy’s draft writing in the Feedback section of his/her writing box.
Read the feedback from your writing buddy.
Copy your draft writing into your Final box and revise this based on the feedback you have received.
Assess the final version of your own writing for ideas using the Writing Rubric.
Peer-assess the final version of your writing buddy’s writing for ideas using the Writing Rubric.
Here is my Draft
I would be very grateful if you were to consider getting me a wolf for me to look after and for them to look after me.
I would like to have a wolf so I could be protected at all times. If I were to have a wolf with me I would be able to train them to become a calm and collected animal. I would take them out for a walk to the park and if I am in any danger they would always be there for me. You would not have to worry about me being captured or being murdered for something that I didn't do.
I would be more responsible and energetic because I would have to take them on a walk or run. I would be more responsible because I would have something to look after. They will let me get on their back and I would never be late to school. What fun!
When I go to bed I would sometimes have nightmares so if I had a wolf for a pet they might cuddle up to me and calm me down. Then maybe I will get more sleep with their midnight black fur keeping me warm and protecting me from the bad nightmares that keep me up at night. SO FLUFFY!
That is why I would love to have a wolf for a pet. So what do you say … no okay maybe I will try a fox next time.
Here is the feedback That my buddy Chloe gave me
Hi Emily I think you have done a good job and although you have to
work on it, I think it's good.
I think you need to think of the negative side of things to see if there
are more negatives than positives, or more positives than negatives.
Last but not least here is my final
I would be very grateful if you were to consider getting me a wolf for
me to look after and for them to look after me.
I would like to have a wolf so I could be protected at all times.
If I were to have a wolf with me I would be able to train them to
become a calm and collected animal. I would take them out for
a walk to the park and if I am in any danger they would always
be there for me. You would not have to worry about me being
captured or being murdered for something that I didn't do.
I would be more responsible and energetic because I would
have to take them on a walk or run. I would be more responsible
because I would have something to look after. They will let me get
on their back and I would never be late to school. What fun!
When I go to bed I would sometimes have nightmares so if I had a
wolf for a pet they might cuddle up to me and calm me down. Then
maybe I will get more sleep with their midnight black fur keeping me
warm and protecting me from the bad nightmares that keep me up at night.
SO FLUFFY!
There maybe some bad things like it might attack people who dare go
near me. When we go for a walk down to the park it might see a dog and
start growling ferociously at them as they chase them away. At night when
I have a nightmare my wolf could wake everyone up by getting possessive
over me and growl at my dreams.
There are a lot of things that could go wrong but at least I will feel safe with
a wolf by my side wherever I go. If you say no I might try a fox next time.
Thursday, 2 August 2018
The Angles Of Math
This week we have been learning how to measure the different angles with a protractor. I found this weeks task very simple when I started to understand what the task was. When you find out what the first answer is the rest can go by like a breeze. I was working with my friends and they thought that it was hard because they couldn't line the protractor up with the measurement.
Here is the task that we had to do. We only did the one on page 9.
Here is the task that we had to do. We only did the one on page 9.
Friday, 27 July 2018
The Science Of Baking
For kete this term Caila and I have been learning about the science of baking and it was a very complicated task. We needed to find out what would happen if we were to change a recipe by one thing.
First we changed the cookies recipe by doing a white vs brown sugar. it didn't make that much of a difference except that the brown sugar spread the more than the white. The brown sugar also dissolved in the butter.
For the cakes we decided to do 3/4 cup water vs 3/4 cup milk. The cake with the water was more moist than the one with the milk and it would also rise more then the milk if you were to lightly touch it.
In the end we found out that you need to be precise with your ingredients because if you aren't then you might end up with a clump of dough.
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