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Friday, 8 April 2016

Lemon Experience

We have bean learning to write some interesting writing so we can be amazing at writing and this is mine.

Lemons are so tasty to eat. When Mr breach gave me one my mouth started to water. I could smell the sour and sweetness but I still ate it. I didn't eat it all because there was more sour than sweet. A bit too much sour. I loved it because it was just delicious. I can't even describe it anymore it was so good.

2 comments:

  1. nice lemon experience

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  2. it was quite sour right i like how you explaned the feeling of tasteing it

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