I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
I think this is good work and is an amazing masterpiece. You must have worked hard because it is amazing. But next time could you make sure it is all lined up and there is no white unless it is part of the design
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its good Emily
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ReplyDeletethank you jasminne. :3
DeleteI think this is good work and is an amazing masterpiece. You must have worked hard because it is amazing. But next time could you make sure it is all lined up and there is no white unless it is part of the design
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