I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, 13 May 2016
Aeroplane
I made a paper airplane out of random paper lying and thought that I could go on an adventure in space on it so I jumped on top of it and flew away. I saw a shooting star and it was beautiful. It was so pretty my parents saw it but didn't see me because they thought that I was another shooting star. It was magical. I loved it but I knew that I had to go back home to my parents until ... I realized that I was in my backyard sleeping so I headed on inside to the kitchen.
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