These past week we have been writing about how the Wallabies lost to the All Blacks but still showed
respect. We all got given the same photo but still got different outcomes. We all did a draft at the start and
made sure to cheek the punctuation. Then we got a buddy to cheek our work and give us feedback. After
that we moved onto our final copy. I love what I have done and am proud of myself for what I have
accomplished.
As the All Blacks shake hands with the Wallabies they look in each others eyes and say “Good game” to
each other. Even if they lost they will still stand tall and be proud of what they have accomplished. The
Wallabies are sad that they lost but are still showing respect by congratulating the All Blacks for winning
the game.
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