Maths Dream House

For Maths this week I have been designing my dream house. I chose to put a forest as the backyard because I love the outdoors and I read a lot of books that had a forest as a backyard so it became part of my house. I  almost forgot to put in a bathroom so I put it on the side. It was a tough squeeze put it still worked. I had to find out the area and perimeter of the house but I found that part to be my favorite. I am proud of what I have made and hope that I can do it again.
                                                         
Area- With the area you times the perimeter.

Fun, Freaky Patterns

This week we were working on finding patterns in Pascal's Triangle for a catch up to show the teacher what we know. I found this task pretty easy but defiantly fun. I hope that we could do something like this soon.

Ice cream you scream we all scream for ice cream 2

This week we ate some goody-goody gum drops ice cream and just like the other one it was amazing. We write out our draft and asked our buddy to give us some feed back. Then we did our final copy and cheeked our work. I am ultimately proud of what I have write right here. hope you enjoy.

DRAFT

The pastel green cream with the rainbow sweets touched the tip of my tongue I felt more alive than I ever have before. It felt as if my taste buds were dancing on top of my tongue. As the cold, lumpy mixture was going down my throat it sent shivers down my spine. When I finished the cup I wanted to march down to the dairy and by 25 more tub of goody-goody gumdrops ice cream. Even though I am in class I still am having a great time.

FEED BACK

Your sentence is great but always put more information about what was the ice felt when Mr Mitchell open the ice cream lid.

FINAL COPY

Mr Mitchell opened the lid And I could smell the minty sweet ice cream from hear. The pastel green cream with the rainbow sweets touched the tip of my tongue I felt way more alive than I ever have before. It felt as if my taste buds were dancing on top of my tongue. As the cold, lumpy mixture was going down my throat it sent shivers down my spine. When I finished the cup I wanted to march down to the dairy and by 25 more tub of goody-goody gumdrops ice cream. Even though I am in class I still am having the time of my life. I loved the minty flavoured ice mixture and the bumpy, sugar coated lollies in the middle. I LOVE IT!

Respect Writing

These past week we have been writing about how the Wallabies lost to the All Blacks but still showed

respect. We all got given the same photo but still got different outcomes. We all did a draft at the start and

made sure to cheek the punctuation. Then we got a buddy to cheek our work and give us feedback. After

that we moved onto our final copy. I love what I have done and am proud of myself for what I have

accomplished.

As the All Blacks shake hands with the Wallabies they look in each others eyes and say “Good game” to

each other. Even if they lost they will still stand tall and be proud of what they have accomplished. The

Wallabies are sad that they lost but are still showing respect by congratulating the All Blacks for winning

the game.

Ice cream you scream we all scream for ice cream

This week we are writing about ice cream. We got to eat vanilla ice cream and then we had to write about it. First we did a draft just to get feed back from our buddy. Then we completed our writing by doing the final copy. I am proud of my work and I know that I have done a great job.

DRAFT
The pastel green cream with the rainbow sweets touched the tip of my tongue I felt more alive than I ever have before. It felt as if my taste buds were dancing on top of my tongue. As the cold, lumpy mixture was going down my throat it sent shivers down my spine. When I finished the cup I wanted to march down to the dairy and by 25 more tub of goody-goody gumdrops ice cream. Even though I am in class I still am having a great time.

FEED BACK
Your sentence is great but always put more information about what was the ice felt when Mr Mitchell open the ice cream lid.

FINAL COPY
Mr Mitchell opened the lid And I could smell the minty sweet ice cream from hear. The pastel green cream with the rainbow sweets touched the tip of my tongue I felt way more alive than I ever have before. It felt as if my taste buds were dancing on top of my tongue. As the cold, lumpy mixture was going down my throat it sent shivers down my spine. When I finished the cup I wanted to march down to the dairy and by 25 more tub of goody-goody gumdrops ice cream. Even though I am in class I still am having the time of my life. I loved the minty flavoured ice mixture and the bumpy, sugar coated lollies in the middle. I LOVE IT!

Christmas Around The World

This week we are here to celebrate christmas and I am so excited. Today we read all about the christmas traditions from all around the world.

In France they leave their shoes out in front of the fire place so father christmas can put presents inside of them.

In Italy they eat very little on christmas day because this is a special day of prayer. Italians share their christmas gifts on the 6th of january witch I find very fasanating.

Dutch people celabrate St. Nichoals day on the 6th of december.

In Sweden Christmas eve is known as as  Julafton. This is a day to celabrete and make partys.

In Mexiconeach night from the 16th of december till christmas day the re-create the story of joseph and mary arriveing at bethlehem.

The Polish people call christmas eve the festavil of the stars. Often the don't eat until the first star apers in the night sky.

The Christmas Food

Today we are learning about the christmas food that we give to santa. Nomaly we give him food and cookies but in other lands they might get out plum pudding or Ginger bread cookies. It is all diffrent in there on specail ways. like in France they leave out a pudding called yulelog.